My opinion:Mr_Cyberpunk wrote:just a quick WIP shot of what I'm working on now.
My Version WIP
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Original
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Off the top of my head, 1. The eyes are in the wrong position (she should be looking down, not at the camera) 2. Her Left arm isn't thick enough. 3. Her Bra has holes which need to be covered up, from the looks of things its either leather or metal- its a bit hard to tell,I'd go and argue its leather. 4. she's got no hands or feet (working on it). 5. she's not smiling, the original has her smiling. 6. she's not tall enough- I think that might be the hair though.
I took artistic liberty with the choker, I know the original doesn't have one but I feel it adds to the idea that she is a dominatrix plus it helps establish the neck a bit more, it may end up being a case that I won't need it in the end, but we'll see- I just needed something there to show where her neck starts and ends. I also put a few lines of hair down the side of her face to give her a bit more of a sexier look as well as establish the ear, I may correct this though. These are really just there to help me out for when I put the shadows in.
1) I don't think this matters much
2) This instead is more important. Not only the arms but the whole torso seems too small (head included).
3) Indeed
4) Looking forward to it
5) More important than 1) but less than 2)
6) See 1)
Keep up the good job!