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Ok ladies and gents - this is the UNFINISHED head (sorry had to make that clear :p). Im putting in the public forum because its important we get as many crits from you guys as possible.

Im just showing the head as shes already had her legs, shoes and hands done by Tek many moons ago. I'll start work on arms and body armor as soon as

Thanks for looking guys - i really appreciate all your help! Oh and if anyone could post a pic of the old anna head id appreciate that too - forgot to grab it!

Can we get that on the model, too?

Nice lips. Dunno why, but the face texture reminds me a bit of Shirley Manson from Garbage...

Old Anna:


Anyway, I'm missing the Nano augs. Looking good WIP

Nice!

The UV mapping is doing my head in, mind ("She has an eye in her forehead! Eeeeeee!").

Is she going to have more horrible facial fuck-ups from all that sub-dermal machinery she's got?

EER wrote:Anyway, I'm missing the Nano augs. Looking good WIP

Yeah, she's just not the same without them.
It's very exciting to see, though, what you've got done! I'ld say she looks really good, but being that it's Anna, I'm not sure that'ld be a good thing.
I'm just hoping the old model was revised a bit...

Yep! therea new model - infact ill upload it

And of course she'll have augs - no point in doing them until her skin and face are correct

Aye aye, good point.
When I said old model, I was refurring to the last wip we saw of the -new- anna model.

And here are some renders kindlly done by Phas -





It gives me a good idea of what needs doing!

her face needs a bit more abuse, and the ear needs a bit of work too. and of course, the augs have to be added in. Just doesn't look like evil-backstabbing Anna without her augs. oh, and her eye is a bit off, maybe if you make the metal around the optic bigger and a little bit brighter, so as to make it more noticalbe.

The optics definitely look odd. I don't think her face needs more abuse, it will look quite enough fucked up once the augs are put in. The optics do look weird, as there should be a lot more metal and the red thingy should be smaller, and her hair and ears are just looking strange, but maybe you're getting to that?

Texture issues:
1) Paler complexion.
2) Darker hair.

Model issues:
1) Thinner head (if possible).
2) Smaller brow.

Ajare wrote:Texture issues:
1) Paler complexion.
2) Darker hair.

Model issues:
1) Thinner head (if possible).
2) Smaller brow.

I fully agree.
Her head needs to be a bit thinner, jaw a bit longer.
And like it was mentioned above, the eye-aug needs to be scaled down quite a bit, and have a nice metal rim.
It's good to see the render, though, it certainly helps.

I know I'm going a little too in depth, but here's what I came up with.
Colour coded as you can see, text matches area.

Cheers all! Great feedback

Id just like to say tho - I havent added any augs or messed up her face yet because theres no point until we get eyes, hair and skin right

Im taking all the feedback and processing it into the next iteration of anna

I think the new nose looks a little thin...
I think it needs to be more triangular...