Unfinished Anna Navarra
Moderator: HDTP Team
Forum rules
Please do not feed the trolls.
Please do not feed the trolls.
- metche_steele
- Illuminati
- Posts: 1321
- Joined: Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:45 pm
Unfinished Anna Navarra
Ok ladies and gents - this is the UNFINISHED head (sorry had to make that clear :p). Im putting in the public forum because its important we get as many crits from you guys as possible.
Im just showing the head as shes already had her legs, shoes and hands done by Tek many moons ago. I'll start work on arms and body armor as soon as
Thanks for looking guys - i really appreciate all your help! Oh and if anyone could post a pic of the old anna head id appreciate that too - forgot to grab it!
Im just showing the head as shes already had her legs, shoes and hands done by Tek many moons ago. I'll start work on arms and body armor as soon as
Thanks for looking guys - i really appreciate all your help! Oh and if anyone could post a pic of the old anna head id appreciate that too - forgot to grab it!
Nice lips. Dunno why, but the face texture reminds me a bit of Shirley Manson from Garbage...
Jonas Wæver
Chief Poking Manager of TNM
I've made some videogames:
Expeditions: Rome
Expeditions: Viking
Expeditions: Conquistador
Clandestine
Chief Poking Manager of TNM
I've made some videogames:
Expeditions: Rome
Expeditions: Viking
Expeditions: Conquistador
Clandestine
Yeah, she's just not the same without them.EER wrote:Anyway, I'm missing the Nano augs. Looking good WIP
It's very exciting to see, though, what you've got done! I'ld say she looks really good, but being that it's Anna, I'm not sure that'ld be a good thing.
I'm just hoping the old model was revised a bit...
- metche_steele
- Illuminati
- Posts: 1321
- Joined: Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:45 pm
- metche_steele
- Illuminati
- Posts: 1321
- Joined: Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:45 pm
- evil_leprechaun
- Thug
- Posts: 31
- Joined: Tue Dec 20, 2005 10:20 pm
- Location: Dublin, Ireland
her face needs a bit more abuse, and the ear needs a bit of work too. and of course, the augs have to be added in. Just doesn't look like evil-backstabbing Anna without her augs. oh, and her eye is a bit off, maybe if you make the metal around the optic bigger and a little bit brighter, so as to make it more noticalbe.
"Do not go gently into that good night, Rage, rage against the dying of the light" - Dylan Thomas
The optics definitely look odd. I don't think her face needs more abuse, it will look quite enough fucked up once the augs are put in. The optics do look weird, as there should be a lot more metal and the red thingy should be smaller, and her hair and ears are just looking strange, but maybe you're getting to that?
Jonas Wæver
Chief Poking Manager of TNM
I've made some videogames:
Expeditions: Rome
Expeditions: Viking
Expeditions: Conquistador
Clandestine
Chief Poking Manager of TNM
I've made some videogames:
Expeditions: Rome
Expeditions: Viking
Expeditions: Conquistador
Clandestine
I fully agree.Ajare wrote:Texture issues:
1) Paler complexion.
2) Darker hair.
Model issues:
1) Thinner head (if possible).
2) Smaller brow.
Her head needs to be a bit thinner, jaw a bit longer.
And like it was mentioned above, the eye-aug needs to be scaled down quite a bit, and have a nice metal rim.
It's good to see the render, though, it certainly helps.
I know I'm going a little too in depth, but here's what I came up with.
Colour coded as you can see, text matches area.
- metche_steele
- Illuminati
- Posts: 1321
- Joined: Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:45 pm